Tuesday, October 18, 2005

Doubly Blind

Doubly Blind

The quiet heart amidst a sea of noise
Peace, tranquility; it is alive.
Empty stares pierce the blind
Such rush, its a wonder they don't trip.
O yes, it is in a different sense,
What danger then, to be blind
And not know.
Let dirt and spittle fly!
Perchance to hit the eye
And now doubly blind they'll cry!

-the bard

1 comment:

shine.is.dead said...

Nice.

I like the enjambments.

The triple rhyme in the otherwise free verse style really adds punch to the lines.